Cut two of trailer.

This is the second rough cut of my trailer. I still haven't added any sound into it but I have added some more shots to vary my locations a bit more, as before it looked like everything was shit in one place. I've added in my film logos and titles. I think it makes it look more professional and realistic. I asked my target audience what they thought about it and they still said they didn't really get the narrative. But when I include my voice over I think it wil lal becme clear and it will tell teh narrative in a binary oppostion. Also the music that my friends band have created will set the mood of the genre and I think it will all coem together.